Good copy builds belief—step by step.

But if your message isn’t clear, relevant, or credible all the way through, readers bounce.

This check shows you exactly where and why you’re losing people and how to stop that from happening.

All for $147.

Send me one piece of sales-focused copy (up to 500 words).
I’ll put it through my 5 Psychological Triggers framework and send back:

✅ A short, direct video (10–20 min) walking through what’s working, what’s not, and what to change

✅ A written summary of the 3–5 most important fixes

Also, we’ll jump on a 15-minute call if you want to talk it through or jam on next steps.

You’ll walk away knowing: What to say instead, why it’ll land better, and how to make sure your copy’s actually pulling its weight.

This is for you if:

  • You wrote your copy (or used AI), and it’s not selling

  • You’ve been stuck in the edit loop for days (or weeks)

  • You want clear, specific feedback from a real copywriter—not vague advice from AI

  • You want your words to sell, not just “sound better.”

Price: $147

Turnaround: 2–4 business days

Hit the orange button below to get this rolling.

Why me?

I’ve written copy for household names like Joybird, Chicco, and Shane Co.

And I’ve helped solo business owners and digital product creators turn passive copy into real sales.

This isn’t theory. It’s the same lens I bring to $5k+ projects—offered only to folks on my list—as a fast, focused check-up.

Can’t I just have GPT review my copy?

Sure. You can…

But GPT really wants you to like it. (So do I, but I won’t pull any punches reviewing your copy.)

It’ll say your copy is “clear and engaging.” Maybe suggest you “add urgency” or “refine your CTA.”

Translation: it’s too nice to tell you the whole truth.

What it won’t give you is a strategic read on the belief-breaking lines—the spots where persuasion quietly falls apart.

GPT won’t say:

  • This opener’s a snooze.

  • Nobody cares about this benefit.

  • You sound like every other brand in your niche.

  • You buried the most persuasive line 200 words in.

  • You’re asking for trust you haven’t earned.

That’s what this check is for.

Blunt. Specific. Human. So you can fix what’s broken—and stop wondering why your copy isn’t converting.

How this will work:

Once you hit the button, you’ll enter your payment info. Within minutes, you’ll get an email from me and we’ll kick this off!

What kinda copy?

This is for copy that’s supposed to sell something—or move people closer to buying.

Think:

  • Landing and sales pages

  • Sales emails and opt-in forms

But Not:

  • Random lead magnets no one asked for

  • DMs or cold emails that feel weird and needy